SOAL

Ok so here's the deal...I dunno if any of you are reading this but if you are here's how it's going down.......you all know the song i put up recently..."Mistakes" has sparked alot of contreversy with my language.....but there's nothing i can do to change that because it is the way i talk....but despite all of this my plan is this.....i like this site too much to get kicked off or banned or however that process works...so im using bandamp to use as a tool for my production...(My Beats)...if you're interested in listening to my actual music then i will direct you to my myspace page where everything is no holds barred and my real music can flourish....i would love to hear what you guys think of my beats because this helps me decide which beats i should use and which ones i should throw out or let someone who likes them use for their music.....i know this is really long and I probably lost you at the start but for those of you who have read this thank you and keep checking back because music is pretty much all i do

-Simulation

This song dives into the demented mind of the shooter's responsible for the Columbine Massacre. In no way does this song condone the actions that took place on that day. Nor does it glorify doing such things.
****Remember this was written to be in that mindset and parts of the lyrics are actually taken from the journals of the two responsible****

Thrown together in about 15 min. tops...i like it myself...how about you guys?

With a sense of security
Preachers preach the impurity
of their contradicting lines
of the religious paradigms
taking it for what it is wouldn't fill the seats
so they brag, boast, and sugarcoat everything they read
it's a modern holocaust of originality
we'll say your serving the Lord
but you're really serving me
They say their in the intereest of the people with their golden steeples
and chapels with baptists castin out evil creatures
in their unforgotten scriptures found in the pages of ages ago
tellin the people to follow their way and forever their soul is saved
making sure you fall down so your sould can be found
and you never will see it again
we have to take them down
it's a battle we must win!

Chorus:
This is what they say(x2)
This is what they do(x2)
This is what they say(x2)
And if they want your soul, their gonna take it too

This one I'm kind of iffy on myself...it starts out ok but i think i changed a little too much when the chorus comes around...it's got an old school feel to it..hence the name...but you guys tell me what i can do with the chorus to make this thing blow up

this piano in this song is very very generic....almost to the point of where it throws off everything else...bujt other than that i would say its pretty good is i do say so myself lol...i would love to hear what you guys think about it